A friend has written you asking for advice about a problem at work. You had a similar problem in the past. Tell your friend you understand the problem, explain what happened to you in the past, sugget a possible solution to a problem.
Dear John,
Hi I hope you are doing fine there. I just received your letter regarding your problems at work lately. Coincidentally I happened to experienced those difficulty in the past.
In my opinion you should not stress your self out because it could strain not only your emotions but also your health. In the past most of my colleagues are bullying me because I was a new employee back then. Everyday they are teasing me, scolding, and even say curse words. What I did is I had shown them what I am capable of, my skills, aptitudes, and character that I have learned in my lifetime. I applied it to my work which greatly reduced the bullying and in time they would also respect me the way I treat them.
John you should show them your talents as well as show them that you are the right guy for the job. If there are anything that I could help you with just give me a call or email me.
Take care and right back soon.
Best Wishes,
Bill
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this difficulty' or 'those difficulties'?
Suggestion: this difficulty; those difficulties
...oincidentally I happened to experienced those difficulty in the past. In my opinion you shoul...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective, and the comma is missing. Did you mean 'every day, they'?
Suggestion: Every day, they
...because I was a new employee back then. Everyday they are teasing me, scolding, and even say ...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wn them what I am capable of, my skills, aptitudes, and character that I have lea...
^^
Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d right back soon. Best Wishes, Bill
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, incidentally, regarding, so, then, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35754189944 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27709661679 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653631284916 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.112183055 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236145529732 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722577825352 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064274008729 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138064826573 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103736471409 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.