Some people argued that history is one of the significant subjects whilst other hold the view that science and technology are more important than history. I strongly support the second view because in these twenty first century science and technology are most convenient thing of modern human being.
On the one hand, it is widely accepted that have hidden a lots of valuable thing in the page of a history. Furthermore, we can found that have several precious thing by the study of history as well as that would be praisworthy for us to ahead in our life in right path. In addition, history always techs us to be sensitive and cautious in every moments of our life because that have lots of meaningful evidence and events of our ancestor. For instance, in my countries Nepal, to observed the different pages of history we can found lots of unbelieveable and adventurous work of them that gives lessons gives lesson for us to be strong and intreped in anytime.
On the other hand, that would be incomplete of our life without the availability of science and technology. In this modern world technology has covered every sector of a human being in order to it is one most significant thing for in these modern period. Although, people are depending technology on every moments of their daily life standards. Modern people life is becoming too much sophisticated by the using of technology. For instance, technology and science takes place at the kitchen to last destination hospital of human being. Modern world has totally habituated with technology they can do every work by the technology.
To recapitulate, that have no doubt history is one greatest gift for modern people however, without involvement of science and technology it is impossible to survived our life in these scenario.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
...upport the second view because in these twenty first century science and technology are most...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
... it is widely accepted that have hidden a lots of valuable thing in the page of a hist...
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Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...icant thing for in these modern period. Although, people are depending technology on eve...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...n these modern period. Although, people are depending technology on every moments of their da...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this scenario' or 'these scenarios'?
Suggestion: this scenario; these scenarios
...t is impossible to survived our life in these scenario.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, well, as to, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as well as, as well as that, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96357615894 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74922390778 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473509933775 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3379777247 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221745094471 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926500254292 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109967497931 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166776561145 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114695349218 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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