People should question the rules of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and
explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the reasons for which the statement may or may not be true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
We are surrounded by authority figures in every aspects of our lives: at home , at school, at work ,even at church and some of us play the role of authorities figures itself as parents, as teacher or as leader. These authorities around us are given along with the responsibility of using it for the well-being of those are being served. So it is important for people to question them time to time without any intention of forestalling the existing progress. To my opinion this standpoint can be analysed and deliberated through case by case study .
To paraphrase a maxim " absolute power corrupts absolutely"; In retrospect there have been numerous example where any authority that have continued to enjoy its power or reign without being impugned has
gone to peak of its atrocities ,exploitation and corruption. like Nazi government ruled Germany until the second world war because the people never stood up against the authority in fear and blindly supported them. Raising the finger against the authority can bring a sense of realization in them about their responsibility for which they have been chosen for. Some people claim that Questioning the government or authority does not mean indulging in violent activity but this is not the case ,there can be both the violent as well non-violent way of to point them for example Mahatma Gandhi weapon of non-violence played a crucial role during India's freedom movement against the British government .
Further More, Benjamin Franklin famously quoted that "questioning the authority is the first responsibility of a citizen". It does not only bring the social change but also shapes the future events. Hence, it is the basic moral right of mankind not to tolerate and stand against if someone not doing reasonable to him or to the society. Today's for the people and of the people's society all over the world is rendering them with maximum opportunity to raise their voice against the ill-functioning of the authority.
However, there are certain situation in which questioning the authority may lead to hindering the existing progress , segregation or stymieing the event that could bring the positive change. Considering the case of India , the world's greatest democracy, where the directly people chooses their re-preventatives. Many development activities gets stuck because it does not pass the consensus of opposition. Many a countries across the world have smooth en the process to directly or indirectly questioning the administration without the fear of being prosecuted or publicly humiliated by the government for example freedom of right to speech or right to information act. Similarly consumer act and rights have been implemented all over the world that have provided the consumers with the right to raise the voice against any malpractices or violation of consumer rules.
So to sum up, If we want the authority to function in a better way. We are liable to challenge them time to time without any intention of forestalling the existing progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, similarly, so, well, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2559.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 490.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22244897959 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.011334572 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518367346939 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 805.5 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4613585217 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.684210526 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7894736842 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 7.80617977528 551% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15679380892 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493106173222 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408178625658 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751938424855 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403006038141 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.