Some people feel that courses can make anyone a teacher while other's feel an excellent teacher cannot be made by pursuing a course. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
It is often believed that anyone can become an educator by engaging in course, however, some people asserted that effective teachers can raise up by considering different factors such as workshops, seminars and teaching trainings. In this essay, I shall shed light on both perspectives.
To begin with, the courses provide great knowledge to the scholars to be an effective and skilled teachers so that they can impart knowledge to the youngsters for the prosperity of nation. As there are many courses in which the students can take admission and learn a lot about different subjects to explore themselves. To illustrate, for becoming a science teacher, the person may choose medical or non medical courses. moreover, the people can be mastered in their interested subjects by enrolling in course.
On the contrary, many people claim that some other attributes also be considered for becoming an excellent teacher. such as teaching training, where the educators learn that how to teach the students while understanding their interest, abilities and capabilities as all are unique and having different learning styles. moreover, the workshops and seminars by which the teachers learn that how to understand the psychology of the pupil as well as they can learn about various teaching strategies namely four corner method, gradual release responsibility model, group discussion methods by which the students could be engaged in classroom.
In conclusion, I believe that only courses cannot make the effective instructors but the others approaches such as workshop, seminars and teaching training methods are much more effective to raise the teaching level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4749034749 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8469032835 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57528957529 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0633946127 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.8 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243645510229 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099161327265 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660738024247 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144846069655 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041618667864 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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