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Some parent believe that a child should not waste time by reading entertainment books instead they should spend their time reading educational books only What's your opinion on this
There are a wide range of sources available to children, including fiction books so that they spend their free time by reading them.However,Parents who see it as time wasted,I accord on it despite the advantages of entertainment-based books.
Firstly, none-educational books have been developed in a way that children are able to spend their leisure time efficiently.this is because those books encompasses various stories(detective, adventure and novel), which might equip youngsters with a more-well rounded perspective of life.Furthermore,there is already a distressing situation that the school life has burdened children with a wide range of pressures such as school assignments, tech-led lessons and rote-learning so this is in where the use of entertainment books would be an asset to relieve the stress.Finally, a child who read entertainment-based books will hopefully enjoy their free time, and maintain a stable learning process
Conversely, it is true that if children spend more time on education books this will pave the way for them to excel academically. First, those books are designed by pedagogic experts and incorporate many study skills, meaning that learners can assimilate better knowledge. those books would also help children's formal examinations because there is an enormous information associated with various fields which are by no means available in fiction books. Therefore, it would be sensible idea to provide educational books for children as integrated part of school curriculum
To conclude, it seems advisable to give entertainment-based books; however, it appears to me that the advantages of educational books are far great.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6374501992 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.69987196464 2.80592935109 132% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597609561753 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 253.062363855 49.4020404114 512% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 283.0 106.682146367 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.2 20.7667163134 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.8 7.06120827912 309% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272734669637 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137317601049 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911447412156 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173714957248 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565700675224 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.2 13.0946893788 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.32 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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