TPO 20
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that the human has been always after improving himself and being more successful through his life. Some people may hold the view that anyone should take some risks to become stronger in life. However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that if someone wants to make the life comfortable to himself, he should do only what he is good at. I personally contend that people should do and experience new things in their life, which will be beneficial in even mundane aspects of their lives. There are different reasons regarding this idea, two of which will be explained in the following.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that the more we take risks, the more opportunities we may encounter. Many areas and skills are unknown to us and it is possible that we already have some talents in these areas, but we are not aware of that. For instance, when I was a student in university, I always do my calculations on paper and I had never tried programming in my life. Once I had a limited time to do my calculations and I knew that I would not make that if I do that on paper. Therefore, I take some risks and try to use my almost entire time to learn programming. Fortunately, I succeed and did my works in a shorter time than I expected before.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that trying new things and get some experiences will help us to gain more confidence. I personally believe that not only this approach does not prevent us to have a convenient life, but also it will bring us the belief that everything in the life is attainable eventually and it will prove us that we are able to do anything in the world. As an example, when I got a job in a company, I did not know enough about my field and I was hopeless and afraid of learning new skills because I thought that everything is complicated in my job. However, I realized soon that I can be prosperous at my job by just trying and experiencing new skills. After a year, I was so confident that I was sure that I am able to reach the highest levels in my field.
To make a long story short, it is highly recommended that no one should be afraid to experience new things in his life. Not only it will help us to achieve more opportunities, but also it may result in gaining more self-confidence in our jobs. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that the life will be much easier than we think if we take some risks rather than do the usual things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 573, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to program', 'to programme'.
Suggestion: to program; to programme
...y to use my almost entire time to learn programming. Fortunately, I succeed and did my work...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42398286938 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67252786045 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47965738758 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5155146235 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.736842105 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5789473684 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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