More and more people are opting for readymade food instead of freshly cooked food. Does this practice have more advantages than disadvantages? Discuss.
It is observed in recent epoch that people have started showing preference towards instant or ready-to-eat food items which save their time and increases their convenience. There are both merits and demerits to this approach. However, I believe that drawbacks of ready food far weigh its benefits which will be explained in this essay.
To begin with, the ready-to-use food is aimed to have long shelf life and to achieve this; the item is packed with heavy preservatives. Unequivocally, excessive use of preservatives and chemicals degrade the nutritional value of the food as well as has detrimental effect on the body. Thus, the food has adverse effect on health, weakening the body in long run. For example, a recent survey result depicts that people are more obese now than in past due to increase in consumption of instant food items available in the market.
Moreover, another disadvantage of the readymade food is that it compromises on taste and preparation method. It may happen that the ingredients used are not liked by the person. As a result, it does not provide satisfaction after eating.
On the other hand, it can often be argued that it is convenient for many families. In other words, the traditional cooking method requires buying of groceries, chopping of vegetables along with time and efforts required while cooking. Unequivocally, many people do not enjoy doing it and consider conventional cooking as waste of time. Consequently, for such group of people instant food serves as a convenient option.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that although there are few benefits of readymade food but it cannot be better option because it deteriorates the health and compromises on taste. It is obvious that person should not pay high price by playing with his health just because of small convenience he gets from such food. Therefore, the disadvantages outweigh the benefits of instant food product.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12698412698 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89929053624 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596825396825 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6343301769 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.82352941176 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283386958536 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781489733533 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518968142621 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135709112943 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043033035991 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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