182 many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats or other animals as a member of their family. : C1 In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not?
As time has gone by, the relationship between the people with each other is decreased. However, in contrast, relationship with their pets are rising.
Nowadays most people have pets and they are very close to their pets. these people treat their pets like a person from their family it sounds can be scary but in my opinion, a close relationship is better for people, reasons why I say so as follows.
Firstly, it is good for healthy such a relationship which has been very close. Animals make us feel relaxed and they reduce stress in our body. Life is very stressful and exhaustive. Thanks to our pets, we feel less stressful and more peaceful. Besides, the research studies have illustrated that patting animals is reducing blood pressure. Moreover, scientists have discovered that our brain might be alive and prevented from a mental disorder with taking care of the pets.
In addition, if a person lives alone, these pets will be a mate or friend for them.they may share their emotions and feelings with the animals and they will feel better, as well these animals will never disappoint people.
Last but not least, such a close relationship is especially good for children because parents sometimes cannot spend time with their children, even if playing with them is very important for child development. In such a time, the pets are taking the major role which concerned with the children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
... and they are very close to their pets. these people treat their pets like a person f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 236.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99152542373 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67492049513 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.7512376137 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1666666667 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367433310185 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131068045889 0.076458572812 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984192819479 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210596621895 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108575313429 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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