In the modern era, people have more spending capacity and tourism across the globe has been rising steadily. Many people are preferred international destinations rather than domestic ones because of affordable prices for international travel. Tourism has been contributing to the economy’s backbone for many countries. Many suggest that this trend will increase in the future but there are certain pros and cons to be considered.
There are many positive effects of becoming a welcoming country to the international preferred destination. International tourism has been promoted by many countries to attract people to study their culture and bringing business to the economy. For example, the city of Dubai in UAE is developed based on International tourism. There are millions of people visiting Dubai every day due to its welcoming hospitality and culture. International tourists can bring business that can be an additional benefit to any economy. Many areas of the countries that can be developed by foreseen the future touristic purpose. There will be a lot of jobs and business opportunities for local people if their areas are developed to be a tourist destination.
Negatives side of international tourism has not been overlooked in this essay. If any area of the land is developed without studying at the ecological and environmental atmosphere will be a disaster in the future. For example, people may damage the natural habitats of many endangered species by polluting the environment using plastics. There are many cases in the past where a forest fire accidentally started by tourist unintentionally. These kinds of actions must be prevented with strong law enforcement.
In conclusion, one can see that tourism has been one of the main sources of wealth generation of developed countries. Hospitality and service sectors are top supporters of the tourism industry. Careful planning and systematic development must be followed to develop a sustainable and environment-friendly destination that has a contributing power to the economy of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47663551402 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26064514422 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523364485981 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2783944418 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5263157895 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63157894737 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159213495048 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587430786621 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558885699248 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102211361207 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367504492632 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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