Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think younger leaders would be better. Do you agree or disagree?
Leaders and directors play a vital role in an organization. Although younger leaders may be put some benefit for company, I believe that this position should be taken over by an elder person.
There are several reasons why chairman should choose younger leaders or directors. First off all, the biggest advantage with younger is that they have physical strength. Leaders are responsible for a lot of business and they always work under a great pressure. Therefore, a good health is an important factor for them to overcome all of difficult and scope everything effectively. In addition to this, younger is a kind of person who always come up with many ideas that help company to find new development tendency or make their organization keep up with the outside world.
On the other hand, from my point of views, it is better for an elder becomes leader or director. I believe that leader must be kind of person who has a large of experience, not only the qualification, but also the soft skills. And, with the experience that is accumulated for years, they can afford to make wiser decisions as well as understand about their inferiority in order to help them prove their talent. More importantly, an elder has usually worked for this company for a long time, so they are likely to receive the trust and respect from all people in the organization. As the result, they would have a powerful voice in the organization, and all employees have to listen to them.
In conclusion, although I cannot deny the benefits that a young leader can make, I still believe it is better if the leader is an elder.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74551971326 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68583889191 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1454577685 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.846153846 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232426129041 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949999395705 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734612767137 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173347458297 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647011474952 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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