You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
Explain why you have moved.
Describe the new house.
Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear John,
How are you? I want to tell you that I moved to London, I am sorry mate I should have told you about it earlier but my company asked to join there immediately. I had no other option than to do so since my colleague over there has fallen sick and I happen to be his replacement.
my accommodation is provided by my company. God, I love this apartment! it has a mesmerizing view of the city's skyline. The apartment has a living hall, two bedrooms, two bathrooms and a kitchen. it has wooden flooring and a central heating system to keep warm at winter. I fell it is quite gigantic since I am the only one staying there. Additionally, it has a shared swimming pool and jogging track.
I am inviting you to come and visit me anytime which suits you, you can stay at my house. The city has a plethora of tourists spots to visit. I am excited to explore it with you buddy. I hope you can come over here as soon as possible
Lots of love
Yours lovingly,
Ayps
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| 2019-04-20 | Praful Shah | 89 | view |
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| 2018-06-27 | Nusrah Naeem | 70 | view |
| 2018-06-27 | Nusrah Naeem | 70 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, How are you? I want to tell you that I m...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...and I happen to be his replacement. my accommodation is provided by my company...
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Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...my company. God, I love this apartment! it has a mesmerizing view of the citys sky...
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Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... bedrooms, two bathrooms and a kitchen. it has wooden flooring and a central heati...
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Line 6, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u can come over here as soon as possible Lots of love Yours lovingly, Ayps
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Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ere as soon as possible Lots of love Yours lovingly, Ayps
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Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble Lots of love Yours lovingly, Ayps
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2688172043 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52850554094 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3102437063 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0769230769 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 4.34317383033 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197596303035 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571655678806 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774497380065 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119183319251 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941596599046 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.