In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing.
What do you think are the cause of the problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In many countries done number of people become overweight have increased and their health condition and fitness level are declining. This essay will discuss on the same bad impact and why this problem generate it.
In the running days, there are a number of reasons the average body weight of people in several countries is rising these days and they have problem with physical condition as well .Firstly, in present time majority of masses like to eat fast Food due to eat cook very rapidly and it is very delicious. secondly globalisation has live day by day for deaf people have to work for long hours. Five instead majority of American wake up early into the morning to go to their work play and arrive home late at night.
On the flip side, people can do to resolve the problem. Of them is that people should be more selective in choosing their diet people should avoid in consuming fast for the same they contain a lot of high cholesterol ingredients which are dangerous for their head they should consume more have healthier food like oats weed grain etectra
I staunch that many people are having problems with body weight and health conditions this date the problems are mostly caused by the hand and healthy lifestyle and where a fabric thing that people could do to fit the problems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7149122807 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27591856724 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.610825511 49.4020404114 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.571428571 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5714285714 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239894714494 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102848431063 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792496790696 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153886034349 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587744670712 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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