Do you spend money or save them?
Nowadays, money is a necessary factor in our life. Without money, we will have serious trouble in providing a basic need such as foods, clothes, house and so on. Definitely, some people if asked would agree with the statement that we have to spend our money instead of saving it for future while others have a negative attitude. As I am the concern, I prefer to spend my money on what I want to do in order to enjoy my life. In the following paragraph, I will shed light on the arguments to supporting my views.
The first reason is that the purpose of earning money is to spend it on something that you and your family member have a better future. You need to spend money to possess some services. If you save money for the future you lose the opportunity you have right now. To illustrate that idea, let’s consider the following example. I remember that my parents always consumed a big part of their income to send us to privet school in order to best teacher educate us. This is caused all of my sibling gained the best grade and finally, all of us study in our interest field in the best university in our country. Additionally, My parents teach us to live in the moment and enjoy of what we have now, not waiting for happiness in the future, as a result of this attitude in my family, I learn to spend my money on what makes me happier in my life. I usually go to the best restaurant in my hometown to eat my favorite cuisine, I often buy clothes of a famous brand, I spend some of my salary on expensive leisure activity like skiing, and also traveling to other countries. Every time I was under nerve- raking times of my life this money allows me to do something to get away from the stress of daily life.
Another reason is that this is our duty to contribute to the economy of our country. The industries of our country need to sell their products in order to keep going and developing their businesses. If we save all of our money and don’t buy anything, many of the factories break down in their work. Actually with spending money on their commodities, they will able to develop their work and furthermore, they will pay more money to their workforce. Consequently, money circle between people to use on their desires.
In contrast, some people believe that we save money for our future programs like starting a new business, buying a big house and so on. But no one knows about the future. If suddenly we die in an accident without any enjoyment, it will very painful, not only we get our aspires, besides our possession not useful for us anymore.
By way of conclusion, base on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that we spend most of our income on something we want to do and acquire our desires at the present time, not in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 440, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the best'.
Suggestion: to the best
...me to send us to privet school in order to best teacher educate us. This is caused all ...
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Line 2, column 655, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...ditionally, My parents teach us to live in the moment and enjoy of what we have now, not wait...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t the present time, not in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, while, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 84.0 43.0788530466 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 52.1666666667 171% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2274.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 513.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43274853801 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4824819704 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477582846004 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.9 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0740824043 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8695652174 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3043478261 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26086956522 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265642299232 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889722700166 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944429450302 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144295975516 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701793528886 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.