The government is responsible for protecting a nation’s culture identity. Some people believe the government should make sure that new buildings are built in a traditional style. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Form the beginning of the mankind history, various nations with different cultures live together. People, themselves, pay attention to their traditional identity. Moreover, nowadays, it can be said that government is responsible for preserving these beliefs. Reversely, the other opines the government have another duty which is more important than this issue.
On the one hand, some culture aficionados assert that protecting a country’s identity is a vital dilemma which the authorities ought to play a comprehensive role in managing this situation. In addition, urban development should be based on traditional style. In other words, the municipality needs to consider some laws for constructing new buildings. Although the appetite for modern constructions is insatiable, the traditional customs should not be forgotten, so it is like a double-edged sword which government should balance it.
On the other hand, some individuals believe that tradition is not the high priority for government. Not only should culturists be responsible for this issue but also the government ought to monitor these NGOs (non-governmental organization). Besides, it has more important duties to do such as: paying for healthcare, education system and building new roads. Thus, we, the people require focusing on this problem in order not to lose our identifications.
In conclusion, I am personally of the opinion that the government must pay attention to this problem, otherwise, some irrecoverable consequences will appear albeit in terms of cultural tasks. However, both all strata of society and authorities should protect the nation’s culture identity lest people will lose their customs which causes many predicaments in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67432950192 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24590049078 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624521072797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9838973457 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.785714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36848269322 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109003232547 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260847089841 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20896941367 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166762565877 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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