The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners.
Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The two pie chart give the information about the precentage of medium baked potato and macaroni by nutritional consistency of dinner.
In first pie chart there is show about medium baked potato with nutritional consistency.There is five base on nutrition food. They contain different precentage on each food.Firstly saturated fat is minority the precentage 10% in medium baked potato whereas,macaroni higly increses on same contain the precentage of 21%.in secondly, other food have been 15% in baked potato similarly,all most decresing the value of nutrition on 5%.Thirdly,another food nutrition contain carbohydrates the precentage of two more than one third(35%)on baked potato interestingly, macaroni is more than half (52%) on nutrition. In above pie chart glocose has 15% and protein have 25% but in below pie chart glocose and protine have same amount (11%) on nutrition consistency.
overall,in this given pie chart show that macroni have higly amount on saturated fat and carbohydrates comparing on medium baked potato have low amount its.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ked potato with nutritional consistency.There is five base on nutrition food. They co...
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Suggestion: Firstly
...ntain different precentage on each food.Firstly saturated fat is minority the precentag...
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Suggestion: , macaroni
...ntage 10% in medium baked potato whereas,macaroni higly increses on same contain the prec...
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... have been 15% in baked potato similarly,all most decresing the value of nutrition o...
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Suggestion: Thirdly
... decresing the value of nutrition on 5%.Thirdly,another food nutrition contain carbohyd...
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Suggestion: , another
...ing the value of nutrition on 5%.Thirdly,another food nutrition contain carbohydrates th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have 25% but in below pie chart glocose and protine have same amount 11% on nutr...
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...ie chart glocose and protine have same amount 11% on nutrition consistency. overall...
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Suggestion: Overall
... amount 11% on nutrition consistency. overall,in this given pie chart show that macro...
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... 11% on nutrition consistency. overall,in this given pie chart show that macroni ...
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...n this given pie chart show that macroni have higly amount on saturated fat and c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, third, thirdly, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50310559006 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26287427286 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515527950311 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.143775291 43.030603864 314% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.2 112.824112599 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.4 5.23603664747 294% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135876423066 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104063322868 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521660040801 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115335129104 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048019832161 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 61.2550243902 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.