What are the qualities of a good parent?, it is a really difficult question, we cannot generalize this idea but as I see some features make parents good or not. In my opinion, some basic components essential for a qualificied parents.
First of all, parents must be supportive of their children, it makes the relationship between children and parents stronger. The children want their parents to respect their ideas and suggestions, they want to feel like an adult. Even if their ideas are wrong, parents should stand their back. These guys will learn experience from their faults. By the way, parents can help them.
Furthermore, parents should behave their children like a friend. In the modern world, children are spending a lot of times with their friend. So, they are imitating their friend what are they doing even their friends have bad habits they do not ignore. As a result, the children can be affected badly by their friends. Parents should prevent such as friendship instead of bad friends, parents should spend time.
Last but not least, parents should get an education it does not mean like a bachelor degree or master degree. It means that parents should educate themselves because first education start in the family if the parents are good role model, these children will grow like them.
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- Holidays honor people or events. If you could create a new holiday, what person or event would it honor and how would you want people to celebrate it? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- 182 many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats or other animals as a member of their family. : C1 In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...stand their back. These guys will learn experience from their faults. By the way, parents ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, really, so, such as, as a result, by the way, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 220.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97272727273 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4294848619 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586363636364 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 618.680645161 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2846195789 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1428571429 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153134251809 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609263884687 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660179086455 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118109048261 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782191785585 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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