EX: Some people think that only the government can make significant changes in society, while others think that individuals can have a lot of influence. What is your opinion?
Discussing about how to dramatic changes in community. Some people consider that the authorities have charge for developing country, others believed that human activities can make more effective. In my opinion, I total argue the authorities have impact more than.
The authority is the leading organization in a country so that those people should have more solution to improve developing country as well as in community. Firstly, the authorities play an important rules in both of human and community. In order to improve the knowledge, the national authorities should put more emphasis on raising people’s awareness of many fields, owning to reduce the theft rates. Besides, governments enhance the quality of life for all citizens though running many campaigns such as strict controlling on pollution, constructing more public transport to reduce traffic congestion especially during the rush of hours. Secondly, the national authorities can raise taxes on cigarettes to persuade more people to give up smoking, owning to protect their health as well as developing the environmentally friendly.
Another point to make dramatic changes by the government that is important to prioritize spending on welfare especially the elder people and children by investing in medical research, educational organization. Finally, the government should be to ban especially people who using drunk, or maybe crimes
In conclusion, I believed that people always abide which proposed by the rules of the national and local authorities, it will bring more significant changes in the community.
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| 2019-01-30 | Nguyen Thi Thuy Linh | 56 | view |
| 2017-10-30 | milanree1527@yahoo.com | 90 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'rule'?
Suggestion: rule
...stly, the authorities play an important rules in both of human and community. In orde...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people who using drunk, or maybe crimes In conclusion, I believed that people al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58506224066 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03479247942 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580912863071 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0310799568 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.6 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164603620457 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678317897458 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551049100483 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111602647338 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512597426715 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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