It is generally accepted that animals are catched by authorites puting them in the zoo and it will have various people come to zoos for watching animals that will render animals feel terrible because they just can live in the limited space. Some people hold onto notion that animals live in zoos that is generally, while others might oppose that zoos are assailing detour animals. Still,pesonally,I completely agree with this view because it will make animals feelling bad and don't have the freedom and think that if we are them, it will deplore for us. This essay is goinh to establish the reasons behid idea.
Various points could endose the reasons of is it necessary to keep animals in zoos? The first reason to consider is that animals should be in zoos because it isn't their life for live in the zoos however their life should be freedom,it shouldn't live in zoos. Research conduoted by google shows that 70% of animals, they love to live in wild more than live in zoos.
Moreover,there are many more benefits to save animals gens. There is no denying the fact that, take human for example if us have be in cage, it is depore.
However,some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70792079208 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39164251637 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8518755631 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222979667811 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971446590372 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109499968879 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131336197305 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073825998144 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.