We daily read in newspapers and magazines that a certain number of people died due to accident caused by lack of awareness of the government towards maintainance of roads. While some people believe that governments should spend more and more money on improving roads and highways, other prefer that governments should spend money on reforming public transportation services. As far as I am concerned, I can concur with former option which states that spending money should be biased toward improving roads. I have explained my opinion in the following lines.
First of all, a research report stated that the most accidents in India are mainly caused due to lack of intrastructure of roads and highways. Researcher from various nominated institutions had concluded that the accidents are inflicted due to potholes, narrowness of roads, lack of speed breakers, abiding traffic rules and laws, etc. In short, government should focus on spending its fund to build roads, replenish potholes, enhance the wideness of roads, etc to mitigate the rate of accidents.
In addition, to avoid wear and tear of vehicles, the roads and highways in a country should be well maintained. The damage of tyre or bursting of tyre is takes place due to bad roads. It may leads to accident which take lives of all people on a vehicle. Moreover, to reduce the time to travel a certain distance, the smooth roads and highways plays vital role.
Last but not least, villages that are situated remotely from the main city faces various problems to reach the city. It may be a serious case for some people of a village. For instance, a pregnant woman who requires instant help of specialized doctor loses her live in between roads or in hospital because of delay. It is most probability that delay which took live of a person is due to lack of awareness toward roads and highways.
In summary, as we can see that there are many advantages of improving new roads and highways, government of a specific country should a major responsibility towards reforming of highways and lanes. Since lack of infrastructure of roads may take lives of people due to variety of reasons such as delay in medical facility, ferocious accidents, bursting of tyres, etc, the government has a responsibility to heed on enhancing the quality of roads and highways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in short, in summary, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97686375321 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79339715237 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521850899743 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9852921862 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.882352941 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8823529412 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289325637541 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840483447003 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137672626545 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156131629855 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142983607241 0.0645574589148 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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