In the modern world, people are looking for quality education and high pay. They believe that it would be possible by moving to other countries and staying there for a considerable amount of time. In my opinion, it has both advantages as well as disadvantages.
On the one hand, students nowadays, after completing their under graduation, prefer higher studies in abroad. This is because of the quality of education offered by other universities. Hence, their parents also insists the children to study and settle in foreign lands. Further, because of dollar value, many engineers want to work outside of India. If they work for two to three years in a foreign country they could earn five times more money than working in their home country. Moreover, staying in a new country paves us a way to learn new culture and language. In addition to this, we have to do our daily chore, if we stay away, which helps us to schedule our day to day activities.
On the other hand, staying faraway from our family members creates stress, because in other countries most of the people running towards money and they would not get enough time to sit back and chat with neighbors. This, in turn, isolate us from them, which affects our mental health. Though we get enough money, we many not get close ones to spend that. Even we feel depressed by doing continuous routine for long time. Moreover, one of the major negative aspects of working in other country is that, it is very difficult for a foreign person to grow in a company. Eventhough we may have a good degree, high working skill and absolute potential then locals, they will never consider.
To conclude, like two faces of a coin, every action we do have its positive and negative effects. It is depends on the perspective of a person, some like to stay abroad, some love their nation. These days people are ready to take up any challenge to lead a happy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... two to three years in a foreign country they could earn five times more money th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... person to grow in a company. Eventhough we may have a good degree, high working ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, well, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 26.3917525773 197% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 937.175257732 168% => OK
No of words: 337.0 206.0 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68545994065 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42555784069 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 127.690721649 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590504451039 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 290.88556701 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 1.44329896907 693% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0482901727 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1052631579 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7368421053 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0762936965895 0.216113520407 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0222839732809 0.0766984524023 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297091126822 0.0603063233224 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0476647344251 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120517045445 0.0580467560999 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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