You are going away to travel for the summer.
A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend.
Say where you are going
Describe your house
Explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house\
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Dear Ben,</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Hope you are in the pink of your health. I was so excited to hear that you are coming to my
place for your summer vacations but I am sorry to </span><span class="hiddensuggestion">inform</span> that I <span class="hiddengrammarerror">will not be</span> able to attend you
at my home.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">To </span><span class="hiddensuggestion">elucidate</span>, I have to close the deal on which I was working from the past six months and cannot let it go. I have taken care of all the necessary things that you will need during the stay. In case, if you <span class="hiddensuggestion">require</span> anything do let me know, I will arrange it. My house is very
small with a kitchen on the right of the entrance and living on the left. My bedroom is upstairs just in front of the staircase and next to it is a guest room that you can use. There is a small lawn where you can sit and enjoy a cup of coffee.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">The only thing I would like you to do is to put the dustbins out on every night and they </span><span class="hiddengrammarerror">are collected</span> every morning. Also, if you could water the plants every second day in the evening would be a great help. I will give you a call before I leave for the trip and will try to come back soon.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Cheers, </span><span style="font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; font-size: 14.5pt;">Dennis</span></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
^^Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...background-clip: initial;'>Dear Ben,
Line 4, column 1324, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
...; background-clip: initial;'>Cheers, ^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2878.0 937.175257732 307% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 345.0 206.0 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.34202898551 4.54256449028 184% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.23770767673 2.54303337028 324% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452173913043 0.622605031667 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 753.3 290.88556701 259% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.2 1.41237113402 156% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 16.3608247423 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 298.159456882 44.8134815571 665% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 319.777777778 76.5299724578 418% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.3333333333 16.8248392259 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.055015488904 0.216113520407 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051462967589 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232919263575 0.0603063233224 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566206586912 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294749360185 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.0 8.37731958763 442% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -17.85 70.7449484536 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 3.82989690722 475% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.2 7.45979381443 338% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 31.68 8.71597938144 363% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 39.5 8.62886597938 458% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 8.54432989691 201% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.