Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif;">In this modern era of globalisation, education plays a significant role in an individual’s life. it
acts as a foundation </span>for the<span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif;"></span> child’s future. Some people opine that a child <span class="hiddengrammarerror">should not be</span> burdened with extra homework while some believe that extra work <span class="hiddengrammarerror">can be</span> beneficial for their education. However, I am in favour of the latter viewpoint. <o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif;">Firstly, homework can have many benefits. It can inculcate good habits in a child and can make the child more disciplined towards his studies. This method can develop a sense of responsibility within a juvenile by doing the assignment by himself at home. This way, children </span><span class="hiddengrammarerror">are forced</span> to work away from <span class="hiddengrammarerror">the environment of</span> the school in order to get the sense of individuality. Secondly, it can improve the time management skills in a child that helps them to tackle the challenges, later in their life when they have to meet the deadlines in the corporate world.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif;">On the other hand, when children are not given projects to complete at home, they can indulge in
extra-curricular activities like sports, drawing or anything constructive of their interest. These activities can help them </span><span class="hiddengrammarerror">to be</span> physically and mentally fit. Moreover, after studying for long hours in school, children may need some time to relax and rejuvenate themselves so that they can start the next day refresh and can able to concentrate better.</p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif;">To </span><span class="hiddensuggestion">conclude</span>, I would say that some amount of extra work is necessary for a child to understand and memorize work that <span class="hiddengrammarerror">has been done</span> at school. Also, they will take their studies seriously or else, they will feel burdened at the time of examination. </p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...cant role in an individual's life. it acts as a foundation for the
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2433.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 7.39513677812 5.12529762239 144% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.42249613526 2.80592935109 265% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568389057751 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.456406753 49.4020404114 333% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.75 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0678393836064 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324310001331 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336252421486 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054463422905 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00726834413495 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.1 13.0946893788 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.77 50.2224549098 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 25.94 12.4159519038 209% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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