You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter,
* state your reason for writing
*describe the problems and explain how you feel
*propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action
Dear Sir,
My name is Ben Walker. I have shifted to into your apartment as a tenant only 4 days back. I am writing this letter to draw your immediate attention to two serious problems. First, the heating system is not working properly. Owing to this, we had to get an extra room heater to protect ourselves from the cold.
When I came to see the room, I was promised a hassle free accommodation. However, so far, this has not happened. Now, I insist that the problem should be addressed by you within the next 3-4 days. I can lend you my keys of the apartment if you want to send a repairman in the afternoon.
I am highly disappointed and disturbed because of the problem. And if this problem still persists, I will have to demand a refund of the deposit that I had paid you and shift to new premises.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Dennis
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3950617284 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5489866072 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685185185185 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.907497243 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.7692307692 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4615384615 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155207125573 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455645524032 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045306744482 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095694756351 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279864262325 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.35 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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