Most teachers think homework is necessary. How far do you agree?
There is no denying that whether or not homework should be given to students has been a controversial matter. Regards to the conventional teaching methods, most teachers agree that homework is essential. Nevertheless, I am totally against this statement as it is awfully wrongheaded.
To commence with, it is obviously proven that homework has exerted a negative impact on the cognitive development of students especially children. Beside having studied about five or seven hours at school along with extra classes, pupils are forced to go through a tough schedule at home with the aim of accomplishing their tasks. There is a likelihood that students will have to struggle with tiredness, frustration, depression, which has a detrimental effect not only on students’ mental and physical health but also on the development of the society.
Furthermore, when homework plays an indispensable part in students’ timetable, they will find it impossible to engage in some extra curricular activities making an enormous contribution to the process of broadening their network accompanied by enhancing soft and social skills. This situation leads to the fact that a great number of pupils are aptitude for theory but incapable of working being successful in workplace owing to the lack of some requisite skills for nowadays jobs such as problem solving, communication, or teamwork.
For instance, it is undoubted that Finland education is considered as the best educational system in the world. This is partly due to the idea that it is dispensable to give students homework with a view to helping them have adequate time and energy to balance their life as well as strengthen their social skills.
To sum up, I wholeheartedly believe that homework should not be given to students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
There is no denying that whether or not homework should be given to students ha...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...work should not be given to students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32394366197 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12399954229 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.4233628239 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.454545455 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0905134847118 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439959958182 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745878582117 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589586863121 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588562851151 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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