Topic: It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience.
Today the close relationship within the family has become a history. In fact with the influence of western countries, developing countries are also adapting a nuclear system. No doubt, this is today’s a heating issue to identify and resolve its various causes. However, in this essay I will try to contend some unique reasons and solutions to at least reduce the big gap within the close relationship of family.
The foremost reason behind this issue is in itself a sense of development and success. For instance, parents send their children far from home to get better education and later due to work entitlements they need to adjust at same place. This shapes a fundamental step to increase the gap within them. The next reason is the cost. As even if some of them want to live together, they cannot move easily from small country sites to big cities and it’s harder to migrate to foreign country. Eventually busy schedule, at somehow, reduces the thirst of relationship and everybody start to see in a lucrative way.
Nevertheless, there is still more than one way to get families together. The most important is the frequent visits, for example to celebrate events and festivals together. In fact, distance does not matter until the feeling and compassion of togetherness is live. Without any doubt, the technology is in itself a solution. They can make calls, send video’s and even live chat to at least lower the trends of being so far.
To conclude, the reasons could be the solutions, here the only need is to start to see things from different perspectives. The closeness does not mean to stay together, they can share the moments of their time at least frequently, through number of ways, to reduce the big jargons of life.
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Sentence: Eventually busy schedule, at somehow, reduces the thirst of relationship and everybody start to see in a lucrative way.
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