You are applying for a job and you need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former boss.
Hello Jonas,
How have you been. Hope you are doing great. I am writing to ask you to write me reference letter. I am planing to apply for a job where they require reference letter from my previous work place.
I am applying for an urban planners position in the company called MAD architects in Oslo. It seems this position suites me perfect, as you know my strong interest in urbanism and my well developed knowledge in landscape. This reference letter suppose to include project descriptions I was working on at your company. Moreover, you should add skills I have and mention shortly some my character traits. Also, you need to write which period I was working at your company.
I need this letter by the end of this week, the deadline to send in application is on Friday midnight. I will be very thankful for your help. Hopefully I will get this position. Fingers crossed.
Thank you for your consideration.
Best regards,
Lina
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... letter from my previous work place. I am applying for an urban planners posit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 5.60731707317 589% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78048780488 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61431104665 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658536585366 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7330134342 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.0 112.824112599 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7142857143 22.9334400587 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35960290967 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110190300078 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893552201644 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229289741406 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109730501207 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.2329268293 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 61.2550243902 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.26 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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