the following diagram shows how pencils are manufactured. write a university lecture.
The given diagram depicts how pencils are produced.
It can be vividly seen that in the initial stage, the clay is rolled on ground graphite with hydrogen gas. This process is made clay into graphite dough. Further, dough is put into the cylinder type for forming process. It produced graphite rod which are cut into strait long shape.
Turning to rest of description, these long leads drying in oven on 800 c heat. Further, these leads are joint with a plain wood by using glue. After that, simple wood is cut into wooden slat by grooves and put
onto this plain wood in order to give the pencil shape. It makes sandwich of slats and cut into pencil shape. The shipping machine smooth these pencil slats and make a proper pencil.
Almost all the stages involved in the process are equally important. If any stage is missed the whole process gets halted.
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...with hydrogen gas. This process is made clay into graphite dough. Further, dough...
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... cut into wooden slat by grooves and put onto this plain wood in order to give th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69078947368 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04958233364 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644736842105 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1541317942 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.4166666667 112.824112599 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 22.9334400587 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.166666666667 5.23603664747 3% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0888295368853 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402886491768 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752440481948 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075890723963 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103178457074 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.2329268293 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.03 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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