Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Home schooling, nowadays, considered as best option for the child's development by some people, while others argue that children should go to school. In my opinion, for the overall development of the child, attending school is necessary.
On the on hand, the advantage of the child being home schooled is that he or she can study whatever subjects interests him or her. In other words, homeschooling allows parents to identify their child's interest areas at an early stage of their life, consequently, make child more clear that what career path he or she would like to opt in the future. For example, if child considers math or science more enjoyable as compared to arts or history, then there is no need to unnecessarily waiting time in studying those subjects, as a result, student has more time to invest in its interest areas and achieve mastery in them.
On the other hand, others argue that attending school is important for the child's overall development and I agree with them. Apart from studies, children at school indulges themselves in number of extra curricular activities which has many positive effects on their personality. activities like taking part in various sports, debate competitions, school level olympiads, theater workshops allows them to develop and enhance their communication skills as well as has profound effect in developing their confidence, which makes them future ready. Furthermore, practice of studying with other children in the classroom, cultivates the team building skills in child, which is essential for future life.
In conclusion, although being taught at home allows student to focus more on its interest areas, for the complete personality development going to school is must as it will make them ready to face real world challenges.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'as the best'.
Suggestion: as the best
Home schooling, nowadays, considered as best option for the childs development by so...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Activities
... positive effects on their personality. activities like taking part in various sports, deb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, so, then, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21875 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77430120984 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1169180523 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.3 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.7 7.06120827912 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295210217204 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143199044229 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968116788702 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207835790584 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115050880702 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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