Q. Discuss both sides of Space travel vs. Current crucial problems faced by humans?
In recent years, there has been colossal upsurge in the ongoing trend between space exploration and the present problems towards humans. In this essay, I will elaborate both the merits and demerits over space travel and hindrances that presently faced by humans.
At the outset, there are myriad of benefits, firstly, in today’s advance technology made it a safest and convenient ways of innovations of having space travel. For example, a research contemplating made global vicinity greener, thanks to the advancement in meteorology to acknowledge of any disaster occurs on such tsunami effects, temblor, deluge; dramatic changes in climatic conditions and further benefits of space travel in using satellite communication made easy to alert the disasters happening using internet, alerting by fax online, Wi-Fi signals. Clearly, thanks to satellites which made easy by alerting the occurrences of the disaster events before, which saves the global environment.
Moreover, of the benefits of space travel on things they benefited additionally from small microchips to major electronic stuff, mobile phones; baby food, phone protection, there are other crucial hindrances effecting to humans is result of global warming. For instance, in most of the countries of more population, the greenhouse gas emission is soaring up in the atmosphere and thus leading to change in the climate conditions, air pollution; warming the climate and so on, which have impact on health problem, resulting to mortality factors. Apparently, people & government shall work together hand to hand, awareness programs shall be accentuated in mitigating the drastic increase of greenhouse gas emissions.
To recapitulate from the above aforementioned, one can conclude that despite of having a numerous benefit on space travel, but the upsides of negative impacts shall be considered to have biodegradable nation and is indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...today's advance technology made it a safest and convenient ways of innovatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, firstly, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 31.9359605911 172% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60409556314 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97548096499 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 139.433497537 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651877133106 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.9794455903 50.4703680194 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.444444444 104.977214359 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5555555556 20.9669160288 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171985786765 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693483458145 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591832793686 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100696064743 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529138422497 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 12.6369458128 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 53.1260098522 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.9458128079 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.53 8.32886699507 138% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 55.0591133005 212% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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