The most effective way to communicate an idea or value to large groups of people is through the use of images, not language
communication is nothing but sharing ones view with others through oral language or with body signs. Few people argue that communication can be more effective if we explain the points with help of any visual display like images or by videos rather than using language. In my opinion, I mostly disagree with this statement that communicating ideas using images is more effective than using language with two reasons and will state why this is useful only at one pirticular situation.
Firstly, instead of using languages if we start expressing our views by showing images they may not get the clear idea about our thoughts. though the can understand the whole idea in the picture, they may get distracted and sometimes they understand whole new idea. For instance, if 10 books images were shown to 8 years old child to choose a book for him to buy, he might think that his parents are going to buy them all the book for his study. The example illustrates that the child in that pirticular situation get tensed by thier parents though unkowingly, but yo be frank his parents are going to buy only one book for him. By considering this example we can say that using the images instead of language for communication may sometimes worsen the situation.
Secondly,by using visual displays instead of oral language for communication, others think that the person is dumb. there is saying that " first imoression is the best impression"by communicating with pictures instead of any lnaguage,they may loose their first good impression at others.By considering this example, we can say this type of behaviour sometimes causes huge loss for poeple who work at consultancies.
On the other hand, expressing our views by using pictures a best way of communication when we deal with deaf individuals. As deaf's can not understand our words we can show them pictures to express our views.
In conclusion,expressing our views and ideas digitally can cause problems also sometimes other may portray us an indivdual with bad behaviour. Thus, communicating our thoughts by images or pictures rather than languages is far more disadvantageous and sometimes lead to worse situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 358.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12290502793 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01248921812 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522346368715 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3907348803 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 5.21951772744 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190049929483 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766720711477 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584974359146 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106388527403 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691123680266 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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