The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Tasbiha on Sat, 02/09/2019 - 12:48

The line graph illustrates the percentage of the age group of 65 years and above as a population in the countries of America, Sweden and Japan over a span of a century.

Overall, the percentage of population being 65 years or above seems to increase in all the three countries in the last decade, with the highest rise in Japan, followed by Sweden and America.

Experiencing steady decline from 5% in 1940 to about 3% in the mid 1980's, Japan displays a rise in the proportion of age from almost 5% in the 2000's to 10% at the beginning of 2030 followed by a drastic climb to 25% in the mid 2030's, ending at about roughly 27% in the year 2040.

Both the USA and Sweden show a steady rise in the percentage from almost 9% and 7% in the year 1940 to about 15% and 14% in the period of 1980 respectively. It is further depicted that some fluctuations are endorsed, where Sweden slightly experiences a fall in the mid 1980's while later jumps to about 20% in the 2010's followed by another steep decline and sudden upward movement to 25% in the 2040. Meanwhile, America undergoes fall from 1980's to a static state of about 14% between mid 1990's to mid 2010's, afterwards following Sweden's pattern, jumps to almost 23% in the 2040.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47111111111 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53397262889 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8193894171 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.666666667 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5 22.9334400587 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126254609183 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703018852194 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346216991847 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875964868106 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321324863642 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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