The process used by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology involves four different stages, from the collection of information to the broadcast of the forecast.
During the first stage incoming information is collected by satellites, radars and drifting buoys. In the next stage information is processed. Satellite photos, radar screen and synoptic charts - obtained by satellites, radars and buoys - are analysed and the weather forecasting is made. After that the broadcast is prepared using computers. Finally, the broadcast takes place in different media as TV shows where the weather forecast is presented by newsreaders, by radio and by recorded telephone announcements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 577.0 965.302439024 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 100.0 196.424390244 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.16227766017 3.73543355544 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12880295321 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 66.0 106.607317073 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 175.5 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0480324844 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1666666667 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166077257468 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760486354569 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632234758014 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152387179735 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502521621463 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.89 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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