Line graph shows water use of three sectors and table shows water use of two countries
The graph depicts consumption of water in three sectors and the table provides information about water use of two countries over the period of 2000.
The graph shows water consumption of agriculture sector over the period of 2000 as the most highest consumed area than other two. From 1900 to 2000, agriculture sector rose up to 3000 kilometers. But the industry and domestic sectors are showing a small rise in water usage over the period up to 1000 kilometers.
The table represents the water consumption of Brazil and Democratic Republic of Congo with respect to the population and irrigation land in 2000. Brazil has huge population and irrigation land than Congo and the consumption of water per person is 359 meter square.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'highest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: highest
...e sector over the period of 2000 as the most highest consumed area than other two. From 1900...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 613.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 122.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02459016393 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6808291505 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 106.607317073 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 185.4 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4919180043 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.166666667 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387447954957 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190339239357 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147794715753 0.0843802449381 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274830806271 0.15604864568 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154146841607 0.0819641961636 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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