You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter
Say what experience you have
Ask what the work involves
Enquire about conditions
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to ask about the temporary job at your hotel ‘Marriott. I saw your advert on job portal mentioning that there is a part-time vacancy for General manager.
I am interested in this job because this is suitable for me as I was working as a General Manager with my past employer ‘Ramada’ for 3 years. My job involved to interact with guests and to manage whole staff and I am well versed in managing visitors hence, I am right for this job.
I am keen to know the details of work. Could you please help me understand what this occupation involves? As I want to be ready before I start my work so that I will not disappoint you.
Further, it would be helpful if you can give me working hour details and information about any hidden condition because, I would prefer day shifts as I stay very far from the hotel, so it would be difficult to travel at night.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Pushpa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rt-time vacancy for General manager. I am interested in this job because this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55056179775 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76054862455 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64606741573 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2371505054 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238381944054 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948753460444 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035523191922 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125970370858 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468726005666 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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