You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releva

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

The graph illustrates the rate of female unemployment in four countries (england, Wales, Scotland, northern Ireland) pf the united kingdom in the years 203 to 2014.

overall, unemployment rate in 2013 is more than 2014. in 2013 england has the highest percentage of female unemployees and Scotland recorded highest percentage in 2014. Wales and Northern Ireland had lowest female unemployment in 2013 and 2014 consecutively.

in england there was 6.8% of unemployment rate in 2013. it diminished slightly in the next year and reached 6.5%. northern Ireland shows significant decrease in the female unemployment with a decrease of 1% in 2014 and stands at 4.6 % with lowest female employees. Wales had lowest percentage of female unemployees with 5.4% in 2013 with a minimal decrease in one year it hit 5.0%.

In contrast to remaining three countries Scotland percentage of women unemployment rate increased.In 2013 it had only 6.1% of jobless women with an increase of 0.6% it climbed to highest percentage of women unemployment rate with 6.7% in 2014.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
... kingdom in the years 203 to 2014. overall, unemployment rate in 2013 is more than...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...loyment rate in 2013 is more than 2014. in 2013 england has the highest percentage...
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Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the lowest'.
Suggestion: had the lowest
...age in 2014. Wales and Northern Ireland had lowest female unemployment in 2013 and 2014 co...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...nt in 2013 and 2014 consecutively. in england there was 6.8% of unemployment ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... was 6.8% of unemployment rate in 2013. it diminished slightly in the next year an...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Northern
...htly in the next year and reached 6.5%. northern Ireland shows significant decrease in t...
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Line 7, column 236, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the lowest'.
Suggestion: with the lowest
...rease of 1% in 2014 and stands at 4.6 % with lowest female employees. Wales had lowest perc...
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Line 7, column 272, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the lowest'.
Suggestion: had the lowest
...6 % with lowest female employees. Wales had lowest percentage of female unemployees with 5...
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Line 10, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ge of women unemployment rate increased.In 2013 it had only 6.1% of jobless women ...
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Line 10, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f jobless women with an increase of 0.6% it climbed to highest percentage of wome...
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Line 10, column 178, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the highest'.
Suggestion: to the highest
...en with an increase of 0.6% it climbed to highest percentage of women unemployment rate w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30177514793 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99743835269 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473372781065 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.2154467669 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5555555556 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210655561833 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111243408964 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596668448433 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154336443243 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397414701766 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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