Some people say that History is the most important school subject. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than history.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion?
According to some, history is one of the most essential school subjects, since it straightens our connection with our culture and helps the government make more clever decisions based on past experience. And there may be some merit in this view. Yet, in what follows it will be argued that science and technology ought to be more emphasized at school, as students will be more innovative, and the country can benefit economically as well.
In my opinion, scientific and technological subjects are crucial to the students, as these subjects make students to be more innovative and creative. Nowadays, the modern world is changing at a rapid speed. Therefore, by creating new things and making discoveries students can fit better and be competitive in the job market. Another advantage of studying science is the positive influence that it has on the country's economy. For instance, implementing some experience gained through scientific subjects might reduce the resources spent on manufacturing.
On the other hand, some people believe that history should be prioritized at school, as it is a bridge between us and our culture. culture is one of the most important definitions of a nation and it enables us to be unique. Moreover, culture plays a significant role in the international variety. During history classes students can get information about their traditions and culture and follow them. In addition, knowing the nation’s history might be valuable for the government, since they will be able to take proper actions in order to rule the country. For example, deep knowledge of history can be applied in international relations.
In conclusion, it was demonstrated that science and technology are the main school subjects as our community needs more creative people, and scientific thinking can promote economical progression. Though, history is vital to maintaining our culture, and it is beneficial for the politicians to have a good understanding of history before governing the country, still, the positive aspect of being familiar with technology and science outweighs it.
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...th technology and science outweighs it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.416918429 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0447656912 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558912386707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8055895137 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0625 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215589513442 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690333826081 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055405447956 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132358863598 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178152766229 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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