Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
living in a foreign country is a life-changing experience for everyone. some believe that it helps people be more flexible in life, as you often face lots of obstacles. And there may be some merit in this view. Yet, in what follows it will be argued that when you live in a country that has a different language, you can experience various social and practical problems, as it is harder to socialize with the community and deal with basic life issues in a foreign language.
you will find it more difficult to socialize with locals when you are living in a foreign country, as you will have a language barrier and cultural differences. these can cause you difficulties when getting an education, finding a job, and making acquaintances. Therefore, you will not be equal to local people when it comes to being admitted to universities and getting into the job market. Thus, no matter whether you live in your country or in a foreign speaking country, it is a must to have a proper place in society for your happiness.
when living in another country, you will also face lots of small problems based on language misunderstandings in your daily routine such as shopping, public transportation, etc. For instance, when I was doing an exchange program in the USA, I always had difficulties understanding some basic tasks at school, and it took me more time to do those tasks, whereas in my native language it will take me no time to be done with them. Even though these things are tiny, you frequently encounter them and they make you feel uncomfortable.
In conclusion, it was shown that experiencing a life in a foreign speaking country might create some social and practical problems for you, since you will find it more difficult to find a place in society and to face small daily problems. In spite of all desirable aspects of living in another country, still, the hardship of overcoming challenges outweighs them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81927710843 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84262038219 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509036144578 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6735400796 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336375894278 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123869714274 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894684864224 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216439078541 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582662000279 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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