Some people believe that parents play an important role in children's life to be a good member of society. Other people,however, think that teachers are responsible for that.
Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
good behaviour and discipline ,today, have become an essential part for every students life.Some children ,however, are very bad in this things and it needs to change.some people believe that parents are responsible for this nature of teenagers and other group of thinkers think it is teacher's role to make a child to nice member of society. I agree with the former statement. Following paragraphs will discuss both these views.
First and foremost, after born, person spends most of his or her time with their parents. they learn lots of aspects of life ,for instance, if mother or father behave anger or use slang in front of child then it would directly affect the children's mentality which is not good at all. so at this time, I would say, mothers and fathers play a vital role to become better person in their life.
On the other hand, teachers also play an important factor on any students' life, because in modern era, adolescents give their enormous time in schools and study so many subjects which are required for their future. For example, single child spend his or her almost 50 hours per week in the school, according to recent survey of Gujarat Technological University.
In conclusion, from above view points, it is clear that parents are more responsible than professors or teachers. Moreover, we can say they are the builder of every children's behaviour. To be a respected member of the society, discipline is the most essential for any teenagers as well as younger and older people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89453125 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53495761934 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64453125 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.6686696499 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.909090909 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321041832834 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891616852559 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834246440352 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172570834995 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829960890057 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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