The population in most cities is growing as people move to cities to find work and new opportunities. What problems does overpopulation in cities cause? How can these problems be solved?
Developments taking place in urban areas are remarkable. Since people move there to apply for a job and experience something new, cities become overpopulated. Albeit this results in several problems as regards traffic and workforce, there is one potential measure individuals can take to overcome them: the improvement of rural areas.
The first difficulty that overpopulation brings about is attributed to transportation. In fact, as people live in urbanized areas for various reasons, most of them tend to use vehicles to fulfill their needs. For example, individuals who seek jobs are in need of automobiles in order to travel around cities and consult with employers. As a result, because the number of cars on roads increases markedly, people are likely to experience rush hours and even car accidents.
The secondary problem is related to employees. With the influx of people to cities, there can be a strong competition with reference to staff recruitment. For instance, should most people apply for a single job, they will have to prove their skills and intelligence. This, as a consequence, will take much time for employers to decide who suits their requirements best.
Nevertheless, certain developments to the countryside could tackle these predicaments. First and foremost, the introduction of more well-paid as well as decent jobs can prove intriguing. This would attract the attention of those who are looking for jobs. The establishment of modernized buildings is the second improvement that can be made. Take skyscrapers as an example; people’s attention would be drawn to this construction because this is a rare phenomenon. With these modifications in suburbs the arising problems will possibly evanesce.
To conclude, it is undoubtedly true that urbanized areas are developing with rapid paces. Whereas the overpopulation in cities entails severe repercussions regarding transportation system and the recruitment of employees, the provision of work and more developed buildings can prove to be viable solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, well, whereas, as for, as regards, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, as well as, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53184713376 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21436672367 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585987261146 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8451717517 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4210526316 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05263157895 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20887422523 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582000374257 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520609373737 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115918361006 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260576356567 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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