do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money?
In some cities, many entertainers who are known by public on somewhere and they participate famous and luxurious places. Therefore, they have a lot of wages on short time. this essay disagrees that a too high money for them. Firstly, this essay will discuss the fact another work on hospital for help people and human contrubutions to country on long time. And secondly, discuss they have not spent years at university like anyone is trying that.
doctor, engineer or teacher. they are all doing the most important jobs in life, but they can get a monthly salary of half of the celebrities making in a day. Maybe their popularity may be worse than the other, but they deserve better treatment than what they do. many hospitals or schools have shabby facility is a prime example, where people need more money to grow, instead of sending them too much money, get it to charity.
there are people who work idly to become famous and do not to learn anything or they was born with their talent for singing or acting. they have not spent year at university. it is unfair to those who go to school properly. there are well-known for silly reasons, but they still make a lot of money just because they are famous in ways that cannot help society. For instance, my country has Chanel youtube is Kha Banh, he has actions unlike human but people like that, so he was paid a lot of money by youtube. what doctor or teacher never do to get that money.
In conclusion, we should pay worthy wages for those who are needed for society because the amount will reflect your real capacity
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62765957447 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28283154287 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599290780142 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8327342719 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5625 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142698714172 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473925015255 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629142202373 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783564219654 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557730977341 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.