The internet has transformed lives and economies, but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Over the last few decades, the incredible development of the internet has changed dramatically the lives and personal finance of human beings. there are different views about whether the interactive connection between people established by the internet will make them behave in the same way. In my opinion, this proposal may become true in several but not all certain extents.
On the one hand, there is no question of the fact that the internet has transformed lives and economies against the clock. Obviously, the internet has born people a brand new way of communication. Thanks to its wide satellite network, video calls on social media such as Facebook, Zalo and Instagram can be made easily between two or even more users. As a consequence, not only does the Net cater for entertainment and chatting purposes, it also really helps to impulse the financial backgrounds. In fact, there are many business negotiations conducted on the internet because of its fast-moving speed and time-consuming features. Moreover, a great number of sellers in terms of clothes and cosmetics have changed their ways of marketing their products from traditional methods such as opening a fixed store to on-line selling ones, for example advertising the goods on the internet. Therefore, the internet is undoubtedly both useful and influential on the humans’ lives and economies.
On the other hand, the augmentation of using the internet too much raises an issue that the world will be packed with individuals acting in the same way. The fact is that the more popular and attractive a trend is, the more likely people will be to follow identical things. For instance, a shocking quote existing on the internet will soon become known and spoken among youngters’ communitiy. What an unimaginable thing but it is definitely real. However, I do not totally agree that all people will do the same things for the same reasons in the same time just due to the internet. An explanation for this is that different people do not lean completely on the internet to say or think but try to take advantage of it to give them a push in creating and achieving their goals. Actually, although there is a great number of vloggers today, not all of their videos are alike. And they are always determined to produce massive series of new vlogs to confirm their own identity and characteristics.
In conclusion, there is no doubt about the positive impacts of the internet on changing lives and economies. even sometimes, it makes people become the version of others such as the young’s manners but many people still try to be themselves and will never be affected by the things happening on the virtual world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, even so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2255.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 450.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01111111111 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85140554468 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544444444444 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0360688782 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.35 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23950628196 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674323956219 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544270769466 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137971602643 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469615651632 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.