Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Majority of the people believe that the sports is an important activity which should include during schooling. I agree that the physical education should the part of education to our young children. This essay will explain the reasons by using examples to support my arguments and demonstrate the points.
The children participating in sports will have different mindset than others. Athletes are strong people as they are physically and mentally stronger than others. Leisure time should be used for these type of extra curricular activities. Furthermore, the physical education will give good concentration and self-confidence to children. In addition to that, the children participating in sports are more organised than others. More over the sports persons are good decision markers as they are more focused on their goal and to make this they dedicated for achieving their desired goal.
Furthermore, the sports persons will have a good team spirit. Through team work everyone should be benefited and they may learn to lead in the group. Leadership also a good achievement through sports. Apart from these job security is one of added advantage. The sport personnel are employed faster than ordinary people.
In addition to this, the academic institutions should give equal importance to physical education along with regular subjects. So that the society as well as everyone should be benefited through this. In conclusion, schools should include sports as a subject in all the educational institutions.
- World history suggests that violence and conflicts were more evident under male leadership than under female leadership. So, for peace to prevail, female leadership can be considered as a better option than male leadership 56
- The computers have changed the way people study. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using computer as study aids? 61
- Some experts believe that is is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages. 67
- The computers have changed the way people study. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using computer as study aids? 73
- Some experts believe that is is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pirit. Through team work everyone should be benefited and they may learn to lead ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, well, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43644067797 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8447923109 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567796610169 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4124852515 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.4705882353 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8823529412 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114350219225 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03919834555 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375337758638 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675968287656 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388688526355 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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