I strongly agree with the speaker as the goverment must focus on the major cities as major components of the nations are represented by the city. However, this doesn`t mean other cities must be neflected. Here are some examples that aplty illustrates why govenrment must focus on the major cities.
Firstly, the nation are known by their major cities like New York cities of US, Delhi and mumbai of India, Pokhara of Nepal etc. These cities are famous and known for their own speciality and reperesnts their specific characters. As their names are sufficient to arrest the attention of people, how can government not focus on these areas ?? Many national and international tourist come to visit those cities and this can benefit in the development of the country as the tourism industry can be flourished and mechanized. People can learn about that nation`s cultural tradions and rituals that can help them broaden their knowledge about the diversity in the culture and traditions present in every nations and can learn about the right and wrongs about these traditions. So, for this reason i support with the speaker.
Secondly, in major cities, major industries, institutions, services are needed as people from different countries mostly visits these major cities and if the required services aren`t available then they won`t be visiting next time. This has to be done so that their next destination would be our city not the other city. And talking about the culture, this helps to represent our nations all over the world and who wouldn`t want to listen their cities name in most beautiful and famous in culture and other various fields. And as mentioned in the first point, when the tourism industry flourishes, then employment opportunity also flourishes and as a result, it can reduce the main burden of the nations i.e:unemployment. And this can bring about development in the other cities too gradually.
Thirdly, when government invests more money and time in such cities, the benefit can be seen all over the nations. As mentioned earlier, tourism industry and employment opportunity can help to solve most of the problems of nation so that government can have better focus on the development of the country. People shouldn`t have narrow thinking they mustn`t just focus on the major cities. What if that city might be the only reason for the development of the whole nation? what if that nation is solely contributing in the economic development of the country? What the point on focusing on the other cities that might not contribute as done by those cities. This doesn`t mean that they should not be focused. Just depending on the priorities, the government must invest wisely.
In sum, i just want to say that government must identify which city to be given more importance that would wisely help them in the welfare of the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, as to, talking about, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2423.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 476.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09033613445 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74300533163 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460084033613 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 734.4 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4125622405 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.347826087 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6956521739 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307285843802 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988094986222 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480825517025 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190231672758 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339067998996 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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