the graph below shows the female unemployment rates in each country of United Kingdom in the years 2013 to 2014.
The bar chart depicts the unemployment level of women in four countries England, Wales, Scotland, Northern Ireland from 2013 to 2014.
The most striking feature to be observed is that Scotland was the only nation where women unemployment rate was increased.
It can be vividly seen that, in England, the percentage of unemployed women was declined only 0.3 percent from 6.8 to 6.5 percent. From 2013 to 2014, the figure of Wales country for unemployed females plunged from 5.4 to 5 percent only. In 2014 , the ratio of Scotland unemployed women upsurged from 6.1 to 6.7 percent.
Turning to rest of description, from Northern Ireland, the figure of unemployed women was 5.6 percent in 2013 but it curtailed 4.6 in 2014. As far as comparison is concerned, England was the leading country for unemployed feamles compare to other nations of United Kingdom. Further, Northern Ireland was the only country among all four nations where unemployment rates diminished swiftly.
- some people believe that physical fitness of strong individuas and teams is the reason for most sport achievements. Other however, think that mental attitude is more important. discuss both the view and give your own opinion. 78
- Some people believe that physical fitness of strong individual or team is the reason for most sport achievements. Others think that mental attitude is more important. Discuss both the view points and give your own opinion. 78
- At the present time, the population of some countries include a large number of young people, compared with number of old people. Do the advantage of this situation outweigh the disadvantages. 56
- some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign languages is in order to travel to work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.discuss both views and give your own opini 73
- some say that people working in different job roles should get different amount of holidays time Do you agree or disagree Give your opinion and examples from your own experience 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nged from 5.4 to 5 percent only. In 2014 , the ratio of Scotland unemployed women ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1835443038 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69998176051 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.7041661764 43.030603864 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.375 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237287156204 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127362892912 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540856448902 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153738883811 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527053749965 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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