It is irrefutable that people know about endangered animals and plants but do not take enough efforts to save them. I will ashed light upon the reasons why people are so indifferent towards these problems and some suggestions in the following paragraph.
There are variety of reasons why human beings are doing so. Firstly, people nowadays very busy and they are running mad in rat race of material comforts and working hard to achieve them. They have become victims of consumerist society. They do not have time to care about plants and animals. Even they do not realise the true value of flaura and fauna. for exemplify, individuals become more money minded as compared to the past decade. They use different types of pesticides to rise profit from crops. As a result, they lost many friendly insects such as bat, which is very useful for the farmers to control harmful insects.
Moreover, the individuals copy the culture of different nations as well as changed their lifestyle and give more preference to eat meat of different species of animals. Furthermore, the increasing population is another reason. To fulfill the desires of community , more space is required. So, individuals cut the trees to expand the living area. Hence, many species of animals become homeless. In addition, with the increasing industry sector and pollution, many types of plants and animals are reached at extinct level.
On the other hand, there are some suggestions to tackle with this problem. The first measure is that the government creates more awareness among community by the help of media such as documentary programs on TV and Internet. Secondly, the government should take strict action towards the hunters and should give hard punishment.Thirdly, to provide more funds to the scientist to increase the breeding of endangered species of animals. Fourthly, individuals make their own social groups to save the environment and also flaura and fauna.
To sum up, it is the main responsibility of each and every individual to protect our animals and plants. They can do it when they control upon our comforts and if the government issue strict rules and regulations towards the protection and safety of these species.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
- Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state.Do you agree or disagree. 78
- Consumer goods have become the most important of people's lives.Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages. 84
- Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to do their job well. Do you agree? 73
- Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects Others say it causes the loss of national identities Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and incl 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'ash'
Suggestion: ash
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Suggestion: For
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...son. To fulfill the desires of community , more space is required. So, individuals...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thirdly
...hunters and should give hard punishment.Thirdly, to provide more funds to the scientist...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11019283747 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7184798201 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559228650138 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8397514019 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3181818182 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192060959685 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545844139518 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592971694708 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104202523043 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713916802556 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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