Can advertising tell about the country
Advertising throughout the word is aimed to attract the targeted costumers and promote the awareness of brands.
Since the advertisement types and styles vary from country to country, it gives us a lot of information about a country. Some people if asked would agree with the statement that the advertising tells about a country while others have a negative attitude. As I am concerned, I believe that advertising has a significant role in introducing the culture and custom of a country. The advertisement aimed to target the Asian people would greatly vary from the one targeted for European citizens. In the following paragraph, I will shed light on arguments for supporting my view.
Many of advertisement announced particular products of the country. Talented professionals that design ads for television, newspapers, and banner often time use a theme that symbols of a country to attract more customers. Furthermore, viewers can inform of costume, models, make up that popular in other countries. To illustrate that ideas let’s consider the following example. Several years ago, I saw an advertisement for an Egyptian perfume in a banner with a background of Pyramids that is a symbol of Egypt country. The photo of the woman that advertise perfume paid my attention. Her Arabic makeup and the costume was new for me because I never have seen before that. After that, I try to get more information about the culture of Egypt and encourages me to travel to this country.
The second reason that when we sell the product as a result of advertising and we are satisfied with the quality we conclude the people of this country are very intelligent and precise persons. For example, after a hard accident, my father’s car completely destroyed. My father decided to buy a car from a Toyota brand. Despite many years of use, it’s totally working best. This causes my father off the opinion that the Japanese are very intelligent and meticulous people. He prefers to buy everything that mad in Japan.
By way of conclusion, base on the arguments above, I am of the opinion that if anyone watches advertisements of a particular country in the television, s/he would be able to sense a lot of information about this country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, so, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01072386059 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98337820882 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536193029491 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1319912655 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288517871028 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695235831888 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079110405815 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148896673219 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814983141401 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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