The table gives information about the average annual spending of university students in three different countries.

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The table gives information about the average annual spending of university students in three different countries.

The chart shows data about the average annual expenditures of university students in term of various categories in three different countries namely country A, country B and country C.
Overall, total spending of students in country A is higher than the spending of students in country B and country C. In all nations, students budget the highest percentage of their cost for accommodation and food.
The number of students' spending in country A is the highest, at $5000 per year. The figures for countries B and C are lower, at $4500 and $1500 per year respectively.
45% of students' expenses in country A is for accommodation, compares to 35% of students in country B and 30% of students in country C. In contrast, in term of food, the number account the largest percentage of students in country C, at 36% of the total. Students in country C also spend a high proportion of their budget on books, at 21%. The figures are lower for students in country B, at 9%, and country A, at only 3%. Students in country A and country B spend 22% and 23% respectively of their budget on leisure, while students in country C spend only 12% of their total budget on this category.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mely country A, country B and country C. Overall, total spending of students in c...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
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...ntry A is the highest, at 000 per year. The figures for countries B and C are lower...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61057692308 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79329405523 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423076923077 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1253282814 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175801206771 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923496503853 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619789361982 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136039280501 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624770279711 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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