Today, most people get married and gave birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is this a positive or negative development?
these days various metropolises are facing an increasingly large amount of traffic issues. this essay will discuss the main cause of this issue including a rise in the number of road vehicles. In addition, this essay will discuss how this problem can be neglected by improving public transportation.
Firstly, there is a drastic increase in the number of automobiles on the road. people are looking for convenience in all sorts of things in their lives and this includes travelling around the city. Today, individuals use their personal vehicle to commute to work or for their personal needs. Although they can use public transportation for the same reasons, they simply ignore it, as they think it is too inconvenient. A recent study found that in Germany, the use of private cars increased by 72% in the last five years. In short, increased private vehicles are the main cause of overcrowded roads.
this problem, however, can be alleviated by implementing better transportation options in the city. The governments should analyze their city's infrastructure and should implement appropriate transportation options using buses and subways. Additionally, they should make these services more reliable and affordable which will encourage people to use these methods over private automobiles. For instance, the city of Toronto constructed 45 different subway routes which cover the majority of the city, and it costs far less than using a car. Due to this implementation, people started using this method to get around in the city. Finally, enhanced public transportation will definitely governments to overcome the issue with overcrowded roads.
In conclusion, traffic congestion is becoming increasingly popular in metropolitan areas of the world. this is because of an increase in the number of road vehicles, but this problem can be mitigated by improving general transportation which will animate individuals to travel using this mode.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48184818482 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07767764479 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551155115512 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8706697348 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.7058823529 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142086521156 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047247318211 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455242180785 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879800510046 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023595712217 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.