You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.1- Say where you think you left the papers.2- Explain why they are so important3- Tell

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.
1- Say where you think you left the papers.
2- Explain why they are so important
3- Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inquire about the documents, which I left on one of the tables when I was there for a meeting last week. these documents are very crucial as it belongs to my job, and I hope you would be able to help me locate them.

I think I forgot the documents on our dining table. they were in a black file with our company‘s logo on it. We booked a table for 10 members, and it was in the center of the hall. To the best of my knowledge, this was the only table with maximum number of seats.

these documents are very confidential and it contains valuable information about my company in our client. it is consist of detailed information of our next project including the budget; therefore, they are vital for me and my organization.

if it is not too inconvenient for you, can you please ask your staff to check for this file. if you already have found a file of this description, can you please keep it in a secure location? Also, please give me a call at 705-987-3448, and I will come by and collect it at your earliest convenience.

Thank you so much for your help. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Nilesh Patel

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50678733032 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6419915144 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601809954751 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7583494594 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1428571429 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223044052801 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765524824368 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834724288889 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128392573713 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103122012318 0.0580467560999 178% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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