The picture below shows Bell Hill farm in 1976 and changes that took place in 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison where relevant.
The given map depicts the layout of Bell Hill farm in 1976 and the alterations which were made for turning it into environment Centre till 2006.
Overall, it is clear that radical modifications occurred in the farm over the given period and it has changed totally. It can be seen that everything replaced with innovative facilities except farm house which remained same.
To begin with, during 1976 area for machinery towards North West was replaced by parking area after three decades. The roads on bottom of parking area remained constant. On the north side there was a barn in 1976 for storing grains and corn etcetera but after 30 years it demolished and a multimedia room was constructed.
Probing further, in the center of Bell Hill farm a farmyard existed, till 2006 that place was utilized for installing recreational facilities. Strikingly, farm house towards South remained same. While cow sheds on right side of farm yard were destroyed and establishment of student housing was made. The poultry farm on south east side removed and Bill Hill farm turned into environment Centre within 30 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dical modifications occurred in the farm over the given period and it has changed...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...yard were destroyed and establishment of student housing was made. The poultry fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07065217391 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57601242783 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5921769755 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150618313312 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612506809147 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498156604792 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960467174444 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049524305353 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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